Interesting stories only can be told throughout nonsense
thoughts
“The art of writing is the art of discovering what you believe." Gustave Flaubert
This week we got the chance of creating stories by passing
our notebooks around. Howbeit nothing at the end had not sense, we ended
up laughing at loud because of that “exquisite corpses”.
In order to improve our writing skill, Professor Jean
Paul wanted us to create, at first, a single question using two “at-board-written-adjectives”
and two nouns as well. Then we had to spin our notebooks around to let
everybody write down a “viable” answer on it; each one with cohesion and
coherence. Finally, we received our notebook with many thoughts, incomplete
ideas, nonsense outlooks that replied everyone's question; nevertheless, we fixed,
after all, those fragments to create a well-structured text and next share it
by a poster (this last part was done in groups).
So, this is my product and I hope you like it:
Where the dreadful snake is going to be whether the
dog's tree is by the way or the hammer gets away?
Maybe it passed by the dog's tree... but, wait, hold
on a second. What if the dog got lost while it was on path toward its tree? If
I'm right, the dreadful snake could not see it or, from another viewpoint, the
hammer never got away but It did act as an obstacle and did hide the dog's tree
- at least the tree - from the dreadful snake's sight; or being just an ordinary
obstacle for snake's get away due to hammer's endeavor was just murder the
dreadful snake; therefore the hammer acted as a barrier for the dreadful
snake's way. Why would something act like that? Well, I guess - I have seen it
already - the hammers are usually possessed by demons from Purpleland and they, the demons, always kill whatsoever into the
woods. Thereby I just don't want to know anything to do with that... and also
because I have not could find the dreadful snake. Why? Uhm, it will bring me
down if I explain it. Alright. Now I am so sad. Everything is because I am ugly
- yes, I know -, but I strongly know that even ugly people as me can find someone
pretty alike to live with. Wait! I remembered something meanwhile... oh, damn
it, I will cry! That fucking hammer cheated on me. It used to think that
everything inside of me supposed to be beauty and, as you know, it is truly
better being ugly but honest... Oh, you'll never gonna realize how many nights
I have spent alone because of that hammer. I still remember how everything was
and how it, the hammer, nailed my heart. What a shame! It was simply
horrible... For instance, just being asked uncountable times "What is a
noun?" Oh, my lord!
Well, I end up - as usual - do not wanting to remind
everything of as I do it forevermore...The dreadful snake can go fuck! I bit
the dust, buddy. I hate it as well as that fucking hammer. I don't know what I
did ask for. All that shit can go to the hell... fucking question.
Thanks for reading!
“Science
fiction is any idea that occurs in the head and doesn't exist yet, but soon
will, and will change everything for everybody, and nothing will ever be the
same again. As soon as you have an idea that changes some small part of the
world you are writing science fiction. It is always the art of the possible,
never the impossible”. Ray Bradbury

Every single story were terrific and yours hahaha awesome.
ReplyDeleteMister Kaiser.
DeleteJe, je, je, je, je, je... you know, pal ;)
Thanks for commenting!
Very interesting I really liked your story and excellent that phrase of Ray.
ReplyDeleteMis Eli.
DeleteI really appreciate your words.
Many thanks for your time.
Tara!
I still think every single story just nailed it as it was, nothing to change on any of those. Different, original and further funny as hell.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr Julian, and also, a nice complement that Quote from mr Bradbury
Mister.
DeleteIndeed, every single story was the mirror of our inner thoughts.
It was, for sure, a grand activity that counts for out learning process.
the quote, well, it was a pleasure ;)
Tara! and thanks for your time
Wow, the story is not as corrupted as almost everything else
ReplyDeleteSort of.
DeleteYou can find countless voices on it.
Hello Juli
ReplyDeleteThe story is so crazy but we laugh to much...By the way we love the quote.